Remember Me

She's sleeping soundly but I see the tears, she knows that I'm no longer here.

Call a code
I’m falling
And I don’t know where I’m going
Save my life
I need to tell her something

I hear you rushing
But I’m still falling
Nowhere near you
Think I’m leaving
And I feel her picture drop
From my hand to the floor
And hear her being forced
Out the door

I slipped away
You weren’t fast
Enough to save me
And now I’ll never have the chance
To tell her

She’s sleeping soundly
But I see the tears
She knows I’m no longer here
But I had to see her
One last time
Had to tell her
One last rhyme

She clings to my picture
I slip it from her fingers
And slip beneath her arms
I try to kiss her
But I’ve missed her
I’m just too far away

She sighs
But I can’t feel her breath
Can’t hold her in a sweet caress
Our worlds are just too far apart
Miles between our aching hearts

I just came here to remind her
To tell her one last thing
I wanted to tell her loved her
And remind her not to forget me

Author's Note

"It's not as deep as it seems
And unfair as it may be
I'm just here to remind you
Remind you not to forget to remember me" -Lapse, Envy on the Coast.
Inspiration for this poem. Comments? Crit?

Reviews

[Marlena]

"She sighs
But I can't feel her breath
Can't hold her in a sweet caress
Our worlds are just too far apart
Miles between our aching hearts"
O.M.G. Favorite lines you've written. Great job, i love all of it :D

[Anjel]

ohh...this is so very sad. to know that you are leaving behind your love and not being able to stop it. then being with your love and not being able to touch them or comfort them. well done with the feelings that are portrayed.

[Winter Poison]

D: *sniffle*
That's all I can say.