Broken Wings

She can’t fly
With broken wings
So weighed down
By broken wings
Healing words don’t mean a thing
She’s preoccupied
With broken wings

Author's Note

....yup. comments, crit, reactions, anything?

Reviews

[Marlena]

Great, I love how short it is. ^^

[Cherry Berry]

This is a sad but beautiful piece. Well penned. So preoccupied by our own problems, we sometimes miss that others are trying to help. I liked this poem.
xox
Cherri

[Wingless Angel of Dream..]

oh, i like this a lot. very simple. yes, very simple. but i still like this alot. i cant critic this really. >< ^^

[Tallulah]

Ooh i love it. Its so pretty. I is good inspiration