Corruption

We’re all a little corrupt
But you’re running out of luck
This demon of greed
Has you down on your knees
And you’ve given up on your pleas
You don’t want to be free.

Author's Note

I didn't feel like paying attention during English class today so instead I wrote this. Thoughts? :D

Reviews

[Jennifer Sharon]

I think it's nice.. :D Kinda apt, especially since you did it during class ;)

[Winter Poison]

A fine way to ignore English class, my friend. :D I like how you emphasized certain words.

[Marlena]

short and cute ^^ (like me! XD)

[Tallulah]

great job. i love the message is strong and powerful. the flow was great.
lylas

[Cherry Berry]

Darkly threatening. Well penned. I enjoyed reading.
xox
Cherri