Blindfolded

Go on and try
To find her eyes
Beneath the cloth
That hides her lies

 

Find the truth
In the black folds
Uncover the stories
That she’s never told

 

Untie the fabric
From behind her head
Give her vision
Let her soul be fed

Author's Note

I have no clue where this came from. Comments? Crit?

Reviews

[Kaitlyn]

Wow. This is my absolute favorite of your work so far! It just doesn't stop coming to you does it? I'm glad! I like the oi=point and the rhyming is amazing, so fluent.

[brittneymarie]

It short, but gets right to the point and I loved the whole idea to it. Very different I liked it :]]


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[Melissa Kesead]

It's short but full of sexual tension and emotion. Love it!

[Marlena]

The title reminds me of a certain someone. XD Really nice though, the rhyming scheme and the flow were great. :)

[Tallulah]

Ooh! I like it. The flow is very good. This piece also makes you think. Its amazing. I love it.