Masquerade

One, two, three
One, two, three

 

How beautiful your cursed soul is
Wrapped in a crimson gown
Take my hand and dance with me
Before the moon goes down

 

One, two, three
One, two, three

 

Take down your mask and let me see
The light trapped in your eyes
Lean in a little closer, love
And let me set it free

 

Beat-beat, beat-beat
Beat-beat, beat-beat

 

The steady rhythm of your heart
Is pounding through your chest
Lean in a little closer, love
Let me give it rest

 

Beat-beat-beat, beat-beat-beat
Beat-beat-beat, beat-beat-beat

 

Beads of sweat roll down your skin
I bow my head by yours
Don’t worry, love, I promise you
This won’t hurt a bit.

 

One, two, three
One, two, three
Beat-beat-beat, beat-beat-beat
One, two, Beat-beat
Halt.

 

Author's Note

Vampires. They rock, no?
I also have this up no dA and FP.

Reviews

[Wingless Angel of Dream..]

I had a feeling before i got to ur A/N that this involved vampires. well, i liked it, it was damn good !!!!!

[An owl on the moon]

Stunning in its depth and darkness, with the lyrical tone so moving. Beautiful writing!

[Gregory Hill]

Very nice, however I couldn't help but noticing that you didn't keep the meter constant. First it is ABCB, Then ABCA, Then AABC, Then ABCD (No Rhyme) Anyways good job, you might just want to fix this. Maybe it is just my prefrence though.

[a]

Dark, "impresion", deep and soul-clutching.
The character is powerful, seducing, terrifying, yet gentle and openhearted.
The setting is perfect - the mystical carnival of Venice, I assume, neverending masquerade, show, that won't stop until you die, and that is perfectly reflected in this writing.
"one, two, three".... life is like a dance, her life becomes a simple dance, her life will and with the dance, chilling, yet burning in flames of lust, deep passion.
I enjoy the refreshing view on the theme, well adopted, great write!
Thank you!

[Flo_writer]

Very nicely done...the vampire waltz. I think this was very creative and well written. You painted the entire event in my mind with so little words, skillfully done.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Wow erotic amazing piece. A beautiful seductive waltz. So full of passion and play.

[Winter Poison]

Why did I not review this before? O.o

Anyway, I love this one ^^ Fabulous work, as always.

[Cherry Berry]

Well penned. I loved the flow of this erotic dance. Well done.
xox
Cherri

[ICE]

Its like a beautiful waltz. Vampires most definately rock.

[Kelley]

YES they do.....smiles
I loved this!!! A slow dance that got faster
and then fizzled out.........made my heart race too.
loved this!!!
Thanks for sharing.
Kelley

[LoLo]

Yay! This poem was great...I love vampires