determined

determined

A Poem by luxx

I'll study the ancient philosophers 
and intellects, so I can gain wisdom like them

No more excuses on why happiness isn't just in me, 
because it comes a time when we have to take responsibility

knowing me, honesty is my best friend 
writing is my first love and drugs are my worst enemy

speaking to myself as i walk down the street
dealing with malnutrition to the soul, my hunger cries out for more

instantly i fall to the ground
confused and distraught, unconscious
please just feed my soul  

the clouds break to my luck, and pour down on me the wisdom 
i once seeked and hungered for and back on my feet as i was 

© 2014 luxx


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''malnutrition to the soul'' - that was an awesome line. Great work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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luxx

10 Years Ago

thank you so much.

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