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Home,

Where is it?

Is it even really there,

Or is it just my imagination?

It’s just my imagination.

Where I am now is not for me.

Never was never will be.

That’s not something you can make up,

No matter how hard,

How long,

How much you push on.

You cannot fit in where you never did belong.

See there is no use in trying,

When your soul is already dying.

You cannot fix what is broken if it cannot stay whole,

So just let me go.

 

Reviews

[Ghost]

Home is where the heart is and I find that home is where my love is... I know it is a hard thing to find home sometimes but you need to trust in to believe in yourself and that you will know when you find your home... Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem

[00000000000000000000000..]

This is very deep you give great feelings of what isn't felt. I always heard home is where your heart is but sometimes there comes a day when one has no heart and people act as if they have full understanding as to why but they have no clue. If only people read not give this advice crap. Advice comes from one's very eyes and no1 else they have to seek to find feel and hurt and change. No1 seems to get that anymore.

[Perdition]

Please forgive me as there are so many tiny tiny things here that I want to change about this one poem. It is so essentially profound that I want to just carry it over a holy hill of night and let the universe take it where it should be staring me back...but this is your "voice" and with that I can see the margins of our language and the rhymes that hold it as well, Along with all those other tiny aspects of our art that poets use to make poetry into life..and this one does IT all so very well.The higher ideal in motion.
I am a simply a man/poet of wild horses that loves to let them run so please forgive me my wants. This is a wonderful voice and far more worthy than my ability to state, and YEP! It is most certainly profound. Thank you for sharing it.

[SleeplessVolcano]

You've said so much in just a few words.....it is hard to describe it when we do find that "home" feeling.....sometimes it's fleeting....other times it lasts longer......often I question those who claim so easily that they've "got it"........But, the thrill remains on for those still chasing it :)

Beautifully written.

[Courtney Hough]

thanks so much!