Forever Mine

Forever Mine

A Poem by mandy

I took you in my arms to sheild you from the cold

I gave you the love to calm the ache that had grown old

BLinded by all that my heart could see

I didnt realize what was and what could never be

And though our roads lead us to another place and time

I still hold in my heart treasures from yesterday

To keep you forever mine

© 2008 mandy


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this was nice! I enjoyed the fact that your memories keep the feeling alive!
It was very well writen
Good job!
keep it up!

Posted 16 Years Ago


beautifully written and inspiring. short and sweet, conveying the message with few words.

from one mandy to another...thanks

amanda


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful story of "true love",
Love given without thought of self or
of getting, only giving.
Beatifully written with an economy of
words, short and pleasing definition of
love.
Beautiful !
Thank you ,
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I have enjoyed writing, be it short stories, lyrics, poems since I was about 14 yrs old. However, I have never done anything with them though it has been a longing to do so. I hope to get some insp.. more..

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