Confused

About an on and off relationship

Sometimes you say you love me,

Sometimes you don't.

Sometimes you say you'll call,

But I know you won't.

 

I feel taken advantage of,

when we're always on and off.

When you say "those three words",

It's enough to make me drop.

 

You can be sweet and charming,

When you kiss me goodnight.

But I feel, deep inside,

That something isn't right.

 

Then sometimes when you're angry,

You call me a b***h, a s**t, a ho.

You blame your anger on your parents,

Is there something I don't know?

 

You get these crazy mood swings,

From low, to high.

One day you want to make out,

Others you make me cry.

 

One week we're a happy couple,

Love everywhere.

Then the next day you walk by,

Like you don't even see me there.

 

I feel so lost and confused,

I don't know what to do.

But I wish, with all my heart,

That our love could be true.

 

Sometimes you say you love me,

Sometimes you don't.

Would you just pick one or the other,

I don't think I can cope.

 

Author's Note

What do you think? I wrote it about a year ago, don't really know if it sux or not.

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

Yay! Very well done. I agree with CBD though. No insults. Other than that...good.

DO THE CARAMELL DANCE!!

[Political Punk ~~ CBD]

very good, althoug i think i would leave out the insults, other wise it was a good heart felt poem