black tears: preface

it wasn't long since my mother and father were driving into the show, I was playing with my doll, seeing how perfect, and safe life was when, I was happy with my family I loved.

just diving beyond north side of Edmonton, I seek out to see how the wind blew with the snow, seeing its white color

stick onto the trees, I even watched the way the cars flew by in rush to get home or to shop for new perfect presents to

give to there kids.

but as we passed the lights there was a truck speeding into my moms direction, the car flipped around twice, once we hit

the bottom of the hill, everything was so dizzy...then once I came to, I saw a man with a police hat and coat on, but that's when everything when completely dark at then end of him taking me out of the car.

Reviews

[zainul]

Perfectly introduces the main story ahead.
Needs some editing.