horses

not done yet

here i am
looking out the window
searching for the key
i am so hurt deep down inside
and there is nobody to see
i wish i could run
to gallop away into the sunset
how it would feel to be free

in a way im jealous of these animals
letting themselves loose
not afraid to show emotions
i want to run with the wild horses
make our hearts one
continue even without the sun
start our day whenever
this venture has just begun
how it would feel to be free

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[Tony]

Wild horses-- seen a few of them in my day. I've often looked out a window and pondered the same thing. Wonderful write.

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"i wish i could run
to gallop away into the sunset
how it would feel to be free"
...ahh very nice line-and
the ending lines are wonderful!!!
love this poem...:-)

james:-)