Can You?

Read the author's note please! :)

Can you feel the pain?

Standing right next to you?

 

Can you hear the silence?

Calling your name?

 

Can you find the path?

Guiding you away?

 

Can you try and search for the past?

Trying to find someone to help you?

 

Can you try and find the doors to Paradise?

Can you tell yourself all these lies?

 

Can you?

Oh, can you?

Author's Note

Random poem! I guess it just came to me XD

Feedback is appreciated a lot! :)

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

unusual. I like the font and all the questions. Great write :) ~em

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you!!!
I shall review your work asap :)

[Lina Grey]

review for a review, eh? well, you're welcome, and thanks, i guess :)

[Admiral Kirk]

Whoa, that was a crazy epic rhythm... kind of like a very short beat pop song... or rap... or anything, really. :P

[Forever Hidden]

I put words together and called it a poem so I really do not know what it is xD lol

[Admiral Kirk]

lol that's the best kind of poem... xD

[Forever Hidden]

XDXDXD HAHAHAHAHAHAHA XDDD

[Dead Flowers & Co.]

It's oddity factor is what makes it so stellar. Fantastic work here!

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you Georgia!! :)

[Dark Rider]

Beautiful. All I have to say. That one word sums it up very nicely. Great job, Hidden!

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you my unicorn!! :)

[Dark Rider]

You're welcome. :D