I Miss You...?

Why oh why?
Why couldn't this be?
I miss you so much.
Every day, every night.
I think about you.

We only talked for a while, but it seemed like a life time.
We met again the next day.
But, sadly I had to walk away.

I know deep inside of my heart, I know we could've been.
I know that we will see each other.
If it's in this life, or the next.

I wish I could see you in a day.
I wish I could see you  tomorrow.
I wish I could see you right now.

Author's Note

The topic we had to write it on was friends or love. O.o So I have no clue where this popped out from. It just did. >.< I don't like it to be honest... It is so cheesy. Ew. Blah. Yuck.. DX I'm probably gonna take this out in a while.. >_<

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

you write songs alot don't you? its really good, i regret not reading more of your work sooner keep writing your amazing!

[Forever Hidden]

Bahhh I'm not that amazing o.o
But thank youuuuuuu so much Jennyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[beautiful dreamer]

you is welcome, and yes you are don't lie lol.

[Felicity's Eve]

This is lovely, Hidden. ^^

Your friend will really appreciate such a great work! :)

It's pretty heart-wrenching though... :(

But I'm sure that's what you were going for! ;)

[Forever Hidden]

Thanks! :)
And you think so? It's not that good.
Yeah it is..
XD Thanks again!

[Felicity's Eve]

You're welcome! ^^

And but of course! :D

And you're welcome...again... XD

[Felicity's Eve]

M'kay! ^^

[Skye]

Nice to read, sad though :(

[Skye]

No problem. Really good poem Hidden :)

[Sami Khalil]

I like the best:
We only talked for a while
but it seemed like a life time...
Well penned.

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you for the kind review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...

[URVI JAIN]

I loved it :) beautiful poem :)

[Forever Hidden]

Thanks! :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)............................

[Wolfwind]

I liked this poem. It was cute and sincere and could be talking about anybody or even an animal or pet, so it covers many facets of possibility. Very nice!

Aaron

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you.

[Dark Rider]

I think it's pretty good. Although I don't read peoms as well as stories, I still like how well writen it is, and the message you put into it.

[Forever Hidden]

Thank you for the review! I appreciate it :)

[Dark Rider]

You're welcome!