Cloudy Eyes pt.2 (generation Bac.)

A second half of a poem written by someone that was really close to me...

 

Cloudy Eyes pt.2

Beaten and broken down

by the ones that make me feel inferior.

Belittled by those around me

them not knowing because they can't see.

I know now the couldy eyes

of the one I called brother for misunderstanding

But confusion no longer holds me

for I too have couldy eyes of FAILURE, SADNESS, and RAGE.

 

 

Author's Note

Sorry I don't have the first poem that goes along with this but the writer of it requested me not to post it, plus I didnt want it to determine how people looked at my version.
-Hope

Reviews

[black_rose_obsession]

I thought it was beautiful...well written and expresses the emotins being felt clearly and vividly leaving the reader hungry for more

[Gandré]

The emotions experienced ...you painted with a sad pen, a beautiful small poem. thank you!