Finish Last.

I couldn't really explain how I felt at the time...(yesterday) but this is what came out of it...

My words are endless-

but my voice unherd.

Everyone sees me-

Even though they pay my thoughts no mind.

 

Your're continuously in my ear-

you want me to listen,

I can't pay attenion.

Your message is loud

and everything but clear.

 

Theres no common ground-

I speak with no sound,

but plenty of meaning behind it.

Your bark is bigger than your bit

and you constantly put up this

pointless, meaningless fight.

To bad in the end...The nicer ones always win.

Reviews

I liked this. It was a great piece of prose. It was a bit choppy at the last line in stanza 2. I was put off at first by to many but's. I do think this is good.