Simply Snowflakes

This was quite random.

Dew drops,

Nature's chemistry.

Society is full of complications;

I just want the simple things.

 

I want to watch the twirling snowflakes

Making their rounds through the sky,

Like dancers on a stage;

I wish I were as smooth.

 

Is it hard to ask for a thrill?

Youth and toxicity?

I want the world to blend;

I want chemicals and metal.

 

I'm dreaming of stairs

Taking me only where I want to go;

Lead me nowhere to escape it all.

I want to be trapped in a cloud,

Away from the thick fog;

The overwhelming streets where we collide. 

Reviews

[J. James Reider]

I like the three 4 line stanzas and then the last 5 line stanza to finish it... well crafted work... there were no rhymes in it, but it read as easily if there were... I also love your usage of similes... too often the most beautiful things in each day go unnoticed... terrific job of catching those moments and making them beautiful!

[Kelley Pascoe]

Well that was different, not bad different just different.
Thanks for letting us slip into your mind.
Kelley Frost

[April Child]

Society is full of complications;
I just want the simple things.

The simple things are the most precious. This is lovely. I want to watch the twirling snowflakes too.