Opposites

Why does he leave if he knows I'm sad?

Why does she cry when she knows I left?

Why does he hide when I'm happy?

Why does she smile when I'm alone?

Why does he sing if he knows I have a headache?

Why does she complain when I'm expressing my feelings?

Why does he laugh when I cry?

Why does she weep when I joke?

 

We're opposites...

Yet, we love each other.

Author's Note

One of my poems on how opposites attract.

Reviews

[ajasminewallflower]

Sounds like you like the ideas of opposites attract. You also like to change point of view in the poems I've read from you.the only thing I'd change is the POV colors, they are kind of dark and can't differ them easily from each other or the black font.

[R.Z.M.]

Ugh I know how this is...

I love how you conveyed their emotions through font colors, also changing p.o.v. every line emphasizes it more. Sweet, short, and an aftertaste of bitter. :)

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Love this.. people spend so much time looking for similarities in others when opposites truly do attract I feel.. that kind of love brings so much more colour to a relationship and variety of things to do and appreciate.. thank you for your awesome writing!

[Shellie]

short but oh so sweet, love the font colours...emphasizing the opposites!!

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Veyr cute write--
it's so true opposites
do attract, well penned
piece I'm glad you shared
Cheers Frank