DRIFTWOOD DREAMS

DRIFTWOOD DREAMS

A Poem by Lou R
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Of sorrow, of inestimable loss....

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DRIFTWOOD DREAMS

 

Cradled within my sorrow

I drift like a leaf on the breeze

Never seeing beyond tomorrow

Lost in a world of dreams

 

Waiting for my dreams to show

I feel like driftwood on the tide

Tomorrow seems too far to go

Without you by my side

 

In my driftwood dreams

Stream the sands of time

as the years pass by

In my driftwood dreams

There's a lonely rhyme

where love's ashes lie.

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Lou R


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Lou R
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The feeling of being so desperately lost and alone is very articulately displayed in this poem. The imagery is so well done. I know I have felt these feelings before, but it is exciting to read the very same feelings expressed in ways I would likely never have thought of. Thank you for sharing this!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Lou R
Lou R

Maplewood, MN



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I'm a "newly minted" U.S. citizen, originally from South Africa. I started writing at the age of 15 and haven't really stopped since! Writing has at times been an adventure, a catharsis, an expressi.. more..

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