i love you so much

describing how much i love her

i love you so much

love you and know that the road for the impossible is too long,

and knowing that you are the queen of women, and i know there would be no one taking your place in my heart,

and i know the the time of longing and love words has been ended,

i love you so much and i know you live in exile and me live in another,

and between you and me there are winds,clouds,lights,and thunder,

and i know to reach your eyes is such illusion, and to reach your lips is such Suicide,

and would be of my pleasure to tear my self for you, and if i have the choice again will choose you again and again,

you who made your shirt from leafs of trees, and protected you from the drops of rain......i love you so much,

and i know i am traveling in the sea of your eyes without Certainty,and leaving my mind behind me and keep on ruining following my madness.... i love you so much,

you my love who holds my heart into your hands for the god sake don't leave me,

and i refuse to resign from the flames of your love, can the Smitten with your love resign???

and i don't really care if i went out from that love a live or died,

you my Madam i love you so so much      

Author's Note

hope to hear from such writers like you

Reviews

[Mary Bradley]

Good poem ... some minor editing needed for misspelt words ( sorry ) all in all it's a good concept . Undying forbidden love ... beautiful but full of suffering . Good luck :-)

[nazia]

love s always like that.. a road so uncertain and a path untreaded....

[Michelle Coleman]

I have found myself in the throws of forbidden love also. I know this feeling well. Though it has been quite some time since I have been tempted to "tear" a man for the chance to express my selfish love. I feel grateful, actually, that I found the strength to abstain. Though barely.

This is well written and perfectly captures that sort of torturous love affair.

[Anas Reyad]

Thank you Dear, nice to hear that you have enjoyed reading this one.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write Anas. I hope you find your ANISA...Take care...:)................

[Anas Reyad]

Thank you Mr.Sami hopefully will find here, you too Take care

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[Cookie38]

how sweet, they say a man only loves one & will move mountains for her. I met that man & I hope you find your woman.

[Anas Reyad]

thank you and hope you will find your happiness with that man

[Cookie38]

I have found happiness with myself something he taught me four yrs ago. I owe him my life. Beautiful angel that he is!