Everything to me

your voice is the answer

to the riddle of my soul.

 

your soft touch

is key to the lock of my beating heart

 

your amazing sense is the password

to the chamber of my mind

 

and you are my whole world

and my everything

 

no matter where you go or who you are just know

this...

you will always have a piece of me with...my heart.

Reviews

[Gordon]

Good job. It's a simple concept. Your voice is the answer, your soft touch is the key, your sense is the password... But the last lines falls short with me. Maybe I just don't get it...

"no matter who you are" (I would think you know who if you're writing about them in such a manner, your touch, your voice, etc) Maybe this is spiritual?

"you will always have a piece of me with... my heart." (how can you have a piece of me with... my heart? Wouldn't it be within? or a piece of me in your heart? or a piece of you within my heart?

Send me a message and straighten me out :) Then delete the review if you don't want my ramblings all over. Thanks for sharing this. It challenged my brain for a bit.

[skigirl]

I really like this. You must have put a lot of thought into it. I can't wait to read more of what you write. Thank You!!!!