The River

My first poetry!

T H E     R I V E R

Swirling like a storm,

flying like a bird,

fleeing like a child,

who's never to be heard,

 

dashing like a dolphin,

waving up so high,

creating a dark aura,

which throws darkness to the sky,

 

yelling like a human,

and singing to the ground,

the river's different noises,

are not classed as a sound,

 

it gobbles up the pebbles,

the life, the stars, the world,

it's hunger never is fulfilled,

until it's done the worst,

 

now finally,

we all see,

how much a danger,

this river can be.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tenny]

Hi Hols that's really good it's just that the second line on the last verse that's a bit short

[Holly - TamaHaru Forever!]

Than you :) And thanks for the tip, I should've taken more time on it then I did (I did it at 8:30pm and it took me about 5 mins!) thanks for the advice :)

[Star]

It's very emotional. 1

[Star]

Hi Star and Galaxy are the same person-me! Please read my poem 'can I still reach out for your hand?'