Her Voice

I hear her say

that she is doing alright

but the pain in her voice

gives away her lie

 

I don't know what to do

I just  want to hold her

and wipe away her tears

Take her back when things

were okay

 

I know that with God

She will get through this

trail that she is facing

That she will have the strength

through him

every step of the way.

Reviews

[VioletRose]

I like this poem, I think that you could add stuff to make the flow understandable. But all around I feel the pain that you feel when you see her.