She's the Sun

Noise: the majority of our lives

The joy on the wind

The misery in the end

The river 'round the bend

And folly all the time

 

It makes all the difference

between good and bad

It follows all the mem'ries

of everything we've had

And every day we wonder

of noises that were sad

And all the times we laughed

at being stupid, mad

 

What could be better

than musical life?

What could replace

this melodic strife?

 

It's her

The one with silent smiles

The one who makes no sound

of fear while walking those miles

and cov'ring dangerous ground

 

She's the music in my car

She's the noiseless sunshine showers

She's the infinite visual choir

Silence

is the star kissing a flower

Reviews

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

Still my favorite. Clearly your best work...I catch my breath each time I read it.

[angelina neves]

lovely! congratulations for winning!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the keeping-the-dream-alive hrase contest!

[Kelley]

Great poem David ! I love how you worked that in just at the end.
Good luck with the contest and thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Helena]

This was wonderfully crafted and presented David!
I love what you did with the phrase and glad
it inspired this wonderful poem! Thank you
for keeping the dream alive! ~ Helena