Impact

     It's a sickness

Breathe through the

                    Thickness

          Make sure my blood

               Is on your hands

*     *     *     *     *     *     *     *

I hold your heart

          Like it's nothing

Just a misunderstanding

*     *     *     *     *     *     *     *

     Like a bomb

We all wait for

                    The Impact

               We all wait for

                    The contact

               With the ground

*     *     *     *     *     *     *     *

               Make the twilight

                    Wait for the

                         Hindsight

          Tell me when you

Can see ahead

*     *     *     *     *     *     *     *

     Like a bomb

               From above

Cut the cord

                    Send the love

               Bombs away

Reviews

[DevilsNeedLove2]

Not only is the content a fresh twist on something timeless and universal, but this poem is also just damn pretty to look at. I love love LOVE it. And I ain't sayin' that just to be nice. =) It's beautiful.

[Sarah B.]

good similes and imagery in this one

[Legion]

I like it. Would do great in a song as well. Well done.

[ashley]

Oh my...
This was absolutely BRILLIANT!
I congratulate you
on a job well done!