Zalmata

You give me heartache
just to take it away.
You take my breath
and leave me balloons full of air.
Why can't you see?
Why do you need me?

Zalmata, take me away.

Why do you need me?

Reviews

[Haleemaaisha]

Boo Im sorry to say that was really corny

[Rosary]

i dont know if i like this one to be honest its kind of plain i dont see emotion or personal perspective wich to me is extremely important in poetry more expression is needed i believe