Griefs

Griefs

A Poem by David

I find my happiness
In all your emptiness
I hope you can forgive me
For killing you

Bleed out the pain
The windows calling
Look out that way
Your words are falling
Everything you do has
     made me so crazy
I won't be through until
     you hate me

Alone is calling me!!!

Little things you remember
But you just don't care about
Bittersweet weeks in December
Turns your life around
And these are the bass
     notes of our lives

Murder the noise
Your faith has crumbled
Forgive yourself
Everyone stumbles
All alone you sit and
     wait for the breeze
I would come with you, all
     you have to do is say please

Home is calling me!!!

Build up the rage
And make more sorrow
Sit in your cage
You're free tomorrow
All the things you do
     have made me so crazy
I won't be through until
     you say to me

Love is calling me!!!

Little things you remember
But you just don't care about
Bittersweet weeks in December
Turns your life around
And these are the bass
     notes of our lives

I find happiness
In all your emptiness
I hope you can forgive me
For killing you
All I really wanted to do
Was to make you full

© 2008 David


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wow i like it alot it shows the emotions somene has before making that ultimate desision wether or not to kill lliving with someone who is bipolar i hear these emotions alot of course he doesnt actually kill but he has those moments the thirst for revenge blood and all his sowwor and pain are takin out on that one human being and that emotion is what i think youve captured good work

Posted 16 Years Ago


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it sounds sad and full of anger...but uplifting in that you can write about

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow i like it alot it shows the emotions somene has before making that ultimate desision wether or not to kill lliving with someone who is bipolar i hear these emotions alot of course he doesnt actually kill but he has those moments the thirst for revenge blood and all his sowwor and pain are takin out on that one human being and that emotion is what i think youve captured good work

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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David
David

Wewahitchka, FL



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