What can I say?

What can I say?

A Poem by Harrisen Viator

Thank you for showing how you really feel
so now I  know there really is not deal
f**k young love the s**t just isn't real
All I do is go around making sure you're good
now I'm wondering if I really should
'cause I have no idea if you really would
for me, because all I do is care,
but when I have my own issues
are you really there?
or am I on my own,
please you gotta let me know
before I lose my mind and 
give it up and just go.
'Cause out of everyone I'm not a quitter
Don't take this as me being bitter
I'm just upset, because you gave
a loser a million chances to live,
and all I get is one
and then you say I'm done.
and I didn't do anything on the same scale as him.
I didn't call you pretty
but I say it everyday
do you even understand, what I'm trying to say?
I just can't believe that something so small
is big enough to set you off
that you want me to go,
but I understand you're stressed
Well, let's put the pain to rest.
Believe me it would be easier 
if I were not so far away.
What happened to "I miss my love"
I'm telling you all of this
so there aren't any rifts
between you and I, and there
aren't any questions about how I feel
believe me, all my words are real.

© 2013 Harrisen Viator


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Ah young love. it's enough to make you go postal.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a real "pouring it onto the page" write, Harrisen; I can feel your frustration. Young love has its perks, I suppose, but I gotta tell you, "old" love is a lot less complicated. Problem is, it has to start here. Keep writing it out - your words are true, and writing may help clarify for you.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Harrisen Viator
Harrisen Viator

Dallas, TX



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