Summer

Another one for/to you

Why do I still write these poems for you?

'Cause there's really nothing I can do

except hope that you'll be with me

when we head back to school,

and there aren't even promises

that everything will go through.

Maybe I like you too much?

Is that what's going on,

or that all of my thoughts

just tell me it's gonna go wrong?

I just want to stay strong,

but this summer is so long.

And I can't even do my feelings justice

and write a decent song,

but work makes me tired

and when I'm tired I get depressed

I guess I should keep writing

to give my thoughts a rest.

To get them out of me

'cause they only bring me down

I should take this frown

and just turn it around.

'Cause at least I have a chance

and that, I can see,

which will give me

all the hope that I need.

Reviews

[LuvdByJesus]

Awwww ^.^ too sweet ;') you should write a poem to this "mystery girl" *wink* *wink* lol jk

[Rita L. Sev]

I remember that feeling well. But time passes more quickly than it seems... I like the line
I guess I should keep writing
to give my thoughts a rest...

For most, writing is too much thinking. For a writer, it is escape. Well done!

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah young love. As beautiful as it is torturous.

[X]

cheer up buttercup. summer is a time for love.

- Monica Adams