Cannot Stop

I'm losing my ability

to write out all these words

I won't have credibility

to back up what you've heard

I have to do it right

I need to start tonight

to get it back

to get on track

I cannot stop this fight

I'm fighting for love

to run off all my demons

I just can't give it up

but my thoughts keep on screamin'

I can't keep doing wrong

I have to finish strong

to keep it right

to find the light

for this path I'm on

Author's Note

Let me know what you think

Reviews

[Pollai]

This is nice, the rhyming is good and it's a good personal conversation going. That struggle when you feel the need to express, even if no ones around to listen. The writing gets frantic as you go and its a good read. Nice work :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Good rhyme and meter. Nicely penned

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you!

[Rita L. Sev]

This piece has sort of a rap feel to it. Flows well, a feeling of desperation. Keep running off those demons in writing, Harrisen!

[Harrisen Viator]

Yeah, that's actually what I was kind of going for! I'm glad that you saw that in your review :)

[LuvdByJesus]

lol this is good :)

[Harrisen Viator]

Well thank you :)