The movie line confused me.
oh, nevermind, I got it now. The prompt. I wonder if there is a way you could work it in so that the movie line sounds more natural and doesn't have to be read in conjunction with the prompt? The flow is pretty good. And the poem is decent enough without changing it, but tossing in an early line about "scoring my life's movie" or something...?
This does just what the prompt requested - in poetic form, you explained what album would be used in the story of your life. Clever - and I like your reason for choosing that music.
Well... what do I say? Different, new, sweet, straight and kinda radical.. Radical?? well i don't know why I said that but it just came out. whatever it is, i liked it. Not "The Poem" types or anything like the super awesome ones, not a very big hit, but sweet.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Well thank you, I enjoy your review! I'm glad that you think this poem is radical! :)