Letting Go

That feeling when you and the one you're with, really need to part

Hey,

so i have this thought,

on what we have going,

and baby,

I can't go no more.

We need to step back

and reevaluate ourselves

oh babe,

we are what we don't need.

I think we should

stop, what we do,

this love ain't true,

we aren't doing 

what we could.

Honestly, you broke my heart,

but I wasn't the best.

And baby, 

it was like a chore.

So let's go away, forever

and never talk again

oh babe,

this is my creed.

I think we should

stop, what we do,

this love ain't true,

we aren't doing 

what we could.

Author's Note

Just let me know what you think about this poem, all thoughts are appreciated!
Thank you.

Reviews

[Peter H]

hmmmmmmmm it sure rhymes its also starkly clear what the theme is , one thing i can say is that people will empathize with it , it sounds more like a generic love song to me , but never the less its a good right , i think it would be good as a song one of those r&b types . its a pretty decent write

[Harrisen Viator]

Thanks for your review. I see what you're saying, it does sound really cliche.