Buzz Lightyear

Buzz Lightyear

A Poem by Harrisen Viator
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1. Name something you lost or gave away that can never be replaced.

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My father bought you,
for me,
when I was a young boy.
You were probably first edition,
I loved you,
Yet, you were only a toy.
Then one day it happened,
garage sale,
when I was, but ten.
I didn't realize the repercussions 
this had,
that I would never see you again.

© 2013 Harrisen Viator


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Harrisen Viator
First prompt out of 130. I'll post my poem for the second prompt tomorrow.

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TLK
Probably encapsulates the point of the films more completely than any admiring article about them online.

You seem to be writing from the experience and perspective of that child as well, which matches the purpose of the poem exactly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harrisen Viator

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, and your first point actually says something that I never considered. I'm .. read more
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Awww.
Very cute. Everybody has let something go at one point or an other and then regretted it. Books. Red bell-bottoms...

But, hey, it is just stuff!

Great poem that everybody can relate to though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harrisen Viator

11 Years Ago

I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
And it means a lot that others are able to relate to it.
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I believe the only thing I regret giving up was my crappy guitar. It had low quality pickups and a trussrod that would not ever adjust for me. When I got a new, shiny Ibanez, I sold my first guitar for $50. I now want it back. But it is lost now. Wherever it is, I hope someone is, at the very least, looking at it. If they're playing it, then I have no worries. Hakuna matata.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harrisen Viator

11 Years Ago

Oh yeah, I'm sure that would be such a sad thing to give up! I remember my first guitar, too, but it.. read more
Aw! Poor Buzz - this is a fun poem, and reminds me of my own childhood (loooong ago), of toys that I loved. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harrisen Viator

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
-Harrisen

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Added on April 17, 2013
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