Wow. This reminds me of a poem of my own (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/TLK/1016944/) in terms of it being a message that the common idea of death is questionable. I think this can be taken as evidence that I am with you on this one.
I actually think that death is the most benevolent sign of the existence of a God: the rich cannot buy their way out of it, the violent cannot fight it, the famous cannot bewitch it. In a world riven by inequality, it is what humbles us all.
And, no matter how desperate your life is, your desperation is only a pin-prick in the smooth velvet hide of the sleeping universe.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I really enjoy your poem, "Girls too, Women" we do in fact have a similar view of the idea of death... read moreI really enjoy your poem, "Girls too, Women" we do in fact have a similar view of the idea of death. It is inevitable so we should not fear what we can't control. You have very good points and I'm glad that others share this belief.
-Harrisen
Wow. This reminds me of a poem of my own (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/TLK/1016944/) in terms of it being a message that the common idea of death is questionable. I think this can be taken as evidence that I am with you on this one.
I actually think that death is the most benevolent sign of the existence of a God: the rich cannot buy their way out of it, the violent cannot fight it, the famous cannot bewitch it. In a world riven by inequality, it is what humbles us all.
And, no matter how desperate your life is, your desperation is only a pin-prick in the smooth velvet hide of the sleeping universe.
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I really enjoy your poem, "Girls too, Women" we do in fact have a similar view of the idea of death... read moreI really enjoy your poem, "Girls too, Women" we do in fact have a similar view of the idea of death. It is inevitable so we should not fear what we can't control. You have very good points and I'm glad that others share this belief.
-Harrisen
Harissen, this says it perfectly. Death is not to be feared; it awaits us all, and can be a friend to those who suffer. Excellent write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Rita, thank you for your review!
It's so true, we can't keep worrying about something we have .. read moreRita, thank you for your review!
It's so true, we can't keep worrying about something we have no control over.
-Harrisen