You stole my heart

I should be writing an essay, but the idea for this poem came to me instead. It's a little sappy, but I guess it will work.

You stole my heart,

tore it apart,

right from the start

I should have let go.

The signs were shown,

that you'd disown

me, should have known

that you would be gone.

Now that I know,

troubles follow

girls like you, show

the truth in your art.

Since I have drawn,

truth of your brawn

you are now gone.

My glee has now grown.

Author's Note

Ignore the grammatical errors, they are used for emphasis. Other than that any critique will be gladly accepted. Thanks!

Reviews

[iliOZ]

i can't feel the "real" loss
you have to experience it to be gracefully brutal about it
sorry if i broke your bubble ... loved your innocent words

[Harrisen Viator]

Oh no, you didn't burst my bubble. I am completely over it by now, I was just thinking back to an experience, so of course I won't have the same feelings now as I had back then. Thank you for the review though!
-Harrisen