Victory!

Victory!

If destiny is the sum of our choices

Does free will only exist at the vanishing point?

At the point of no return?

Yet we have to try!

We can rise above the truth and the lies!

The world is truly in our hands!

Reach for my hand

Hold tight and join the chorus

This is not the end!

I am burning my bridges

Losing my way in this chaos

Together we can forge a path!

Dying alone is not my goal

Together there is an unfathomable force

In the end there is a victory to be had!

Reviews

[B]

Stunning
Sometimes all it takes is to just notice the simple things that connect you with someone
Why you end up in the same place ..... somethings are meant to be .....

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. Destiny and free will are always debating inside my head and I am sure other minds as well. I am glad you liked it.

[B]

It sure is debating the most right now for me
Which is why I found solace in this piece .... thank you

[JessyJacob]

I am just trying to share my view, no hurts,

these lines,
" Yet we have to try!
We can rise above the truth and the lies!
The world is truly in our hands!"

are quietly matching with mine, yet feel ultimately, that what destiny decides is best, the desire of going beyond is something, where you are being tested.

But very inspiring poem, true inspiration for one, hunting for true love.

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing my writing. As we go through life all are tested, some more than others. Remember as the saying goes, "with great power comes great responsibility." I am glad you saw one of the meanings of this piece.

[JessyJacob]

People are sometimes like kids, where they like happiness, and hate when someone hits them, however old you are. Well, if it is something related to responsibility, then it is worth being tested. Thank you, for taking time to inspire people with your poetry.