The Unseen Enlightened

The Unseen Enlightened

A Poem by H.L. Cerveise




The Unseen Enlightened


We will never see

a truly enlightened being


Because once they attain it

we can no longer see them


Even though they are standing

right in front of us

and all around us

and in us

© 2016 H.L. Cerveise


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I freaked out the first time i read this

So i wrote something then i deleted it

Yes some souls are that transparent and light
That they can outlive space and time

I give you this
Your words have a life of their own :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

this was a spiritual thing that i got out of it
and i cant explain
H.L. Cerveise

8 Years Ago

You got it and that is the fun thing about Zen enlightenment it can not be put in words and when att.. read more
Nisreen

8 Years Ago

yeah ...... :)
Because, they are omnipresent and not confined to the body anymore. I love this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

8 Years Ago

Yes, that is the main thing I want the reader to get.
Right now I want to comment on the picture and the title. The brain, heart at the center, both which are enlightened amid the cosmos, that all beings are connected as the "celtic knot". I bet..


Posted 8 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

8 Years Ago

Yes and the knot is how everything is interlinked and connected. You nailed it as always. Thanks for.. read more
Diamond

8 Years Ago

Writing, I still have to write about your thought behind it. I will do it in some time.

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Added on July 29, 2016
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H.L. Cerveise
H.L. Cerveise

Penn Yan, NY



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I am a computer consultant and creative writer. I should also tell you a number of my writings are inspired by on-line encounters I have in virtual worlds of various natures. Often these worlds spill .. more..

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