Lady Lake Seneca

Lady Lake Seneca

Full moon upon lake

Rippling waves bounce at my feet

Sea of stars below

Author's Note

If you want decide
If this is like a haiku
or a senryu

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words. You took me to the wonderful place with your amazing description. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[B]

It's really nice whatever it is

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I have seen this on Seneca when the moon is bright, and the lake is choppy. I am glad you liked it.

[B]

I have a fascination with the moon

[H.L. Cerveise]

It is the closest celestial body to us and the most dominant object in the night sky so I feel it holds a deep meaning to the inner core of man.

[B]

Oh waw
I never thought anyone speaks like that anymore
Lol
Like a Ryan gosling in real life

[H.L. Cerveise]

Hum and lol, thank you.

[B]

I really like him
He speaks like he's come out of my dreams
Guys don't talk like that anymore

[Nisreen]

I see a love tale in your words

and the song here

John Barry - The girl with the sun in her hair

[H.L. Cerveise]

Okay to keep up with all this I have created yet another file to track this. Many thanks.