Beautiful how a simple tool can create so much ...... It writes history as we speak ..... New age literature
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I consider this one a haiku about the new nature we f.. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I consider this one a haiku about the new nature we find ourselves in. I am glad you liked it.
I have just been browsing through some of your poems/haikus. I really enjoy how you're able to capture so much in just a few words in this haiku, it's very impressive. I chose this piece as it's one of the pieces I have enjoyed the most so far. I also really like all the beautiful pictures you've chosen to accompany your pieces. They really stand out and add that much more, in my opinion. I am new to writing haikus, so I am very happy to have stumbled upon your page and writings. I look forward to reading more, this was beautifully captured. Very well done!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing this writing. Like William Liston, I try to write in many differ.. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing this writing. Like William Liston, I try to write in many different lengths and styles. Often it is not me the picks the style or length it is the writing itself that sometimes does that. Sorry if that sounds strange. I am so glad you liked this piece.
8 Years Ago
You're very welcome. I am not familiar William Liston (though the name rings a bell for some reason).. read moreYou're very welcome. I am not familiar William Liston (though the name rings a bell for some reason), but I have just found his page on here after your mentioning of him, and I look forward to reading his work as well as more of yours.
No need to apologize, as I do not find that strange at all. I can relate to the writing taking over and leading the direction, tone, and style of a piece. I also find that instinctual writings tends turns to out much better than whenever I try to pre-meditate with a game-plan or any preconceived idea. But yes, I thought this was very well executed, and I look forward to reading more of your work and observing your different styles.
Nice one, H. L. Love the brevity of this piece, as well as the ambiguity of the last line; it could be interpreted many ways. I felt like it was a light-hearted, yet serious piece. Well done.
I am a computer consultant and creative writer. I should also tell you a number of my writings are inspired by on-line encounters I have in virtual worlds of various natures. Often these worlds spill .. more..