Until the End of Time

Until the End of Time

You poke and prod me to expand.

I balk and think too much.

You push and tease.

I know you love me.

You watch my face and see the truth.

I cannot hide my thoughts from you.

You yearn so much for me.

I know I cannot be without you.

You wait patiently for me to understand.

I love you like no other.

You love me this I feel.

I want to hold you until the end of time.

Reviews

[B]

Till the end of time
They play and toss and turn
Loving. Fighting. Talking

That's a promise there

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. Yes, yin and yang always entwined and striving.

[B]

and flying and diving and colliding

[H.L. Cerveise]

So true I agree

[Nisreen]

There is nothing
Like two people in love
The light they create

Your words are so tranquil

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing this writing. I am glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful words for love.
"I love you like no other.
You love me this I feel.
I want to hold you until the end of time."
I liked the above lines and this is my favorite kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing this writing. This was something that came to me in a flash and I had to write it before it vanished into the void.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well and you are welcome.

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
Well done!
Keep up the great work!!

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thanks for reading.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Wow.....I am speechless. "I want to hold you until the end of time"- this is a great line in itself.
such a wonderfully penned poem. Always a pleasure to read your work. Keep writing.

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I am so glad you like my writings.

[Luisa König]

so many people use the theme of love in their poetry and/ ore writings but everyone describes it differently with their own special words with so much meaning. It's fascinating. Thank you :)