Love from the Void

A short poem that came to me as I looked up at the starry sky one night.

Love from the Void

When the last stars wink out at the end of time,

My love for you will still shine like a beacon in the empty void.

Reviews

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
Keep up the great work!!

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading my writing.

[iamshadowine]

two phrases, short but amazing! i really liked the title! :) it was good.... keep writing :D

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

[Gee]

Like this, short and sweet. Puzzled slightly as I thought, perhaps incorrectly, that void meant empty .

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading my writing. The universe is a vast void and what I am saying here when everything in the universe is gone, an empty void, my love will still shine.

[Gee]

Mmmmmmmmm,okey dokey

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Wow, that is so great. What a strong feeling. Touche, touche. This is so great that one can go on praising it endlessly. Had you literally spoken this somewhere, all would have cried, "Once more". Keep writing.

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reviewing my writing. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Kirsty Woodward]

because this is exactly what it feels like; to love so intensely.

Great words.

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reviewing my poem. Short but intense but glad it got my point across.

[William Liston]

Enjoyed this. It was short and sweet. Nicely done.

-William Liston

[H.L. Cerveise]

It is rare I write something this short; however, I can only write what comes to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. You create perfect place and perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote