Occam's Razor Rebooted

Just a time long ago in a virtual world.

Occam's Razor Rebooted

Subtitle: Virtual Reality for the Terminally Insane

We escape from the dream world.

I awaken to the real world.

We play in bits and bytes.

I awaken to the real world.

We dance with vamps/faeries/furies/minis.

I awaken to the real world.

We fulfill all our desires with perfect bodies.

I awaken to the real world.

We add and exile friends with the click of a button.

I awaken to the real world.

You/I/Us sit in our extraordinary place in our special way.

My phone rings,

You/I/Us it gives me peace/calm.

My ears hear the news of change/beginning/ending.

You/I/Us feel the falls.

My mind races and goes off in a multitude of tangents.

You/I/Us sit surrounded by the mist.

My mind/heart/soul balks.

You take me to see what I like to see.

I watch the acts of creation, and it unfreezes me.

You ghost in and out

I ghost in and out.

You go poof.

I log out.

Reviews

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

A good poem, sir, very impressive and lovable. You talk of virtual reality and the things that are afoot on the social networking sites. Your refrain and repetition is quite impressive.
Keep writing.