Erella – 'Summer Tempest' – an excerptA Story by Haim KadmanA Friday morning meeting.Having
completed packing her personal effects, Erella descended to the hotel’s
restaurant for a light late breakfast, and a cup or two of black coffee. She
could have called room service and ordered them to bring it straight to her
suite, but she preferred to get down to the restaurant at this late hour; to teach
those miserable provincials how to behave, push around a bit the entire restaurant
staff, make them sweat round her table. Anyway
they deserve it! She has descended this very morning at six am after all, to
the swimming pool; to learn to her regret that it opens up to hotel’s guests
only when the lifeguard arrives, at about nine am. Nothing helped her this
time, all her demands for a VIP treatment, which was unquestionably due to her
views were rejected. With no other choice she went out to the beach to bathe in
the sea’s cold water a few moments, instead of her early morning habitual half
an hour swimming. While
drinking her black coffee she thought of Yoske again, chuckling softly.
Although she had to bathe in the sea this morning it reminded her her first
date with Yoske, when they went to the sea shore together. It was her first
ever time to go out with a ‘ben’, that’s how those hairy creatures were called
during her youthful years; and in spite of that romantic recollection, she did
not let him have her for another passionate round this morning, but sent him
away quite rudely. Her
cell phone was ringing, barging into her thoughts, it was her sister Vivi. ‘Erella
have you checked out already, I’ve phoned to your suite…’ ‘I’m
in the restaurant, what about you? Are you on your way or at home still?’ ‘I’ll
be with you in five minutes at the most.’ ‘Vivid
beauty!’ Erella muttered, expressing a kind of improvised happiness, using an
archaic Hebrew term, drawn from the depth of her memory; the absolute right
term at the times when she and her sister were teenagers, a term that reminded
her the happy days of her youth. ‘Fine, we’ll have enough time to sit a few
moments and have a nice cup of coffee.’ Erella added and switched off. Hardly
two minutes passed and her young sister stood at the hotel’s restaurant
threshold, looking for her. As soon as she located Erella a rather easy task,
as Erella was the only guest at that late hour, she rushed to her excited with
blushed cheeks. Erella
bothered herself this time to leave her seat, and embrace warmly her young
sister, she exchanged with her young sister kisses on both cheeks and affable
smiles. ‘Sit
down Vivi, sit down,’ she said pushing her sister gently toward the nearest
chair. ‘How’s Itsik and the kids?’ ‘They’re
fine… You’re coming to us now, aren’t you?’ Vivi asked with a sudden sense of
alarm. ‘Sure
just as we’ve agreed, I’ll stay the weekend with you, and you’ll see me to the
airport.’ ‘It’s
such a pity that you’re already flying back, I wanted you so much to stay with
us at least two more weeks…’ ‘Maybe
next time Vivi.’ Erella replied raising her arm, to summon the lone waiter that
was left to serve them. The latter rushed to their table, causing Erella to
smile with much satisfaction. ‘More
coffee and what pastry do you have? What would you like Vivi?’ She turned to
her sister before the waiter managed to answer her. ‘With
your permission I would recommend our… ‘Okay,
okay fetch us your full assortment.’Erella ordered him briskly, sending him
off. ‘Have
you bought some presents for our kids, you promised them, remember?’ Vivi asked
her as soon as the waiter left their table. ‘Oh
com’on Vivi do you think that I’ve got time for such things? Besides, I don’t
know what to buy for them. Alright don’t put on that Yom Kippur face of yours,
we’ll buy it on our way, okay?’ ‘Okay,’
Vivi agreed relieved, watching the approaching waiter. They
were silent while the waiter unloaded his tea cart and placed a steamy coffee
pot, cups, the assortment of cakes on the table, made a polite slight bow
towards them and left. ‘I’ve
bought tickets to the Safari for Saturday morning.’ Vivi said while Erella was
pouring the hot coffee into their cups. ‘What
Safari what are you talking about? What kind of a Safari one can do over here?’ ‘We’ve
got an open zoo over here some years already, where visitors may enter it
riding in their cars.’ Vivi remarked quite offended. ‘Do me a favor Erella,
don’t treat us like some third world country. It isn’t maybe the level that
you’re used to in America, but we aren’t lagging behind you in this country.’ ‘Okay
don’t get excited, what can one see over there?’ ‘It’s
a large and a fine zoo, with numerous kinds of animals, lions, elephants, even
giraffes, and for the kids it will be an exceptional experience.’ ‘They
haven’t visited there yet?’ ‘No
they haven’t, and it will be a wonderful opportunity to be together and make
the kids happy.’ ‘Sure
thing, where is that zoo exactly?’ ‘Near
Ramat-Gan not far from Mesubim junction, you know along the Geha road…’ ‘Don’t
talk to me in riddles Vivi, how long does it take to get there?’ ‘About
half an hour, or a few more moments.’ ‘How
do you expect us to get there? You’ve sold your car some three months ago,
haven’t you? That’s what you’ve told me.’ ‘Well,
that’s no problem at all, we’ll take a cab.’ ‘Oh
com’on Vivi, a cab with a driver, we won’t be able to talk freely. We’ll hire a
van with enough comfortable space. You’ve got a license as far as I know, so
will load my luggage and drive straight to your home. We’ll hire it for a full
week, thus you’ll see me to the airport on Saturday and enjoy it a few more
days " What do you say Vivi?’ There’s a solution to every trivial problem,
and that would surely be the right one. Erella thought watching her kid
sister’s worried face. ‘But
I can’t drive a van, I’ve got a B license.’ ‘How
about Itsik?’ ‘He’s
got such license but he’s at work, and they’re so strict on working hours over
there… ‘Call
him, I’ll have a few words with his boss.’ © Haim
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Added on August 19, 2011 Last Updated on August 19, 2011 AuthorHaim KadmanPetach-Tikva, IsraelAboutProfile: A few words about myself: being a native of a small country whose waist is seventeen kilometers wide in a certain area; and in seven to eight hours drive one can cross its length, I was amaze.. more..Writing
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