A scene of jealousyA Story by Haim KadmanA meeting between old friends takes a nasty turn.‘Summer tempest’ " an excerpt Ruvke’ Etsioni was about
the same age as Yoske’, the difference between his age and Talma his wife was
four years at the most. He was too a member of the ‘Working Youth movement, at
his time, but at the far Borochove district branch. Talma met him in one of the
hikes to the southern craters, and since then she did not leave him. It was a
real love story as Nehama used to note it to Yoske’, recently in particular to
tease him indirectly; for he had to marry her although he loved Erella with all
his heart, and if Erella would accept him this very day though he has not seen
her face since then " and how she does look now he can’t know, he would have
followed her blindfolded. Particularly now after the way Smadar has betrayed
him without a second thought one might say, as if he did not exist any more as
far as she was concerned. Thus he was thiking sprawled in the comfortable
armchair, watching one of the Etsioni’s abstract paintings on the opposite
wall. Nonesense, he scolded himself after a few seconds,
she too made a fool of me, even more than Smadar, and I loved her more then
any other woman. Ruvke was answering that time Nehama
questions on their visit in the U.S.; famous cities names were filled the air,
New York, Chicago, Niagra falls, the Grand Canyon. The conversation details
from its start has not penetrataed Yoske’s conscience, but Talma’s appearance
carrying a big platter with drinks and refreshments, woke him up from his day
dreaming. A lively conversation flowed up, pictures
were drawen and after a short preparation they watched a video abundant with
details; thus although his gloomy feelings, this evening was going to be a very
pleasant one " an evening that would push aside the last ramnents of the slight
alienation between Nehama and him. Ruvke’ poured him a few glasses of high
quality bourbon, and Talma brought the details of a conincindental meeting
between them and Ruvke’s first girl friend at Niagra Falls. ‘…that Yemenite girl from the
neighborhood, which you were simply dying on her.’ She remarked laughing. And Yoske heard himself telling them a
childhood event about a Yemenite that many were dying on her. ‘I was then some
nine or ten year old, I climbed up to the roof to look for my best friend. His
mother was busy with their laudry, and at those days every family had a week
day in which the roof were at their disposal " and there was a laundry room up
there were a fire was burning under a boiler, instead of today’s penthouses.
This friend was supposed to help his mom, watching the fire, fetching woods and
so on. Well that Yemenite reminded very much Shoshana Damari (a famous singer),
but Shoshana wasn’t as beautiful as she was. She was married to my best friend
step father, and she was still courted by young men. I reached the roof and saw
her standing near the parapet with a yound pale man beside her, while she was
hanging some linen. He talked and she watched him from time to time with a
mysterious Mona Lisa smile. I approached them to ask her where my friend is,
and my lips were almost pronounciating the question: ‘Eli’s mother where is
Eli…’ when I heard the young man saying: “Just one word from you and I’ll jump
off the roof!” Yes that’s what he was saying to her and he was much younger
than her, about twenty two twenty one years old at the most. She turned to me and with an amused
smiled asked me: “Shall I tell him?” While I shocked as I was raised my two
arms and hands above my head beseechingly and cried out: “No, no,’ and ran
away. ‘Did she mess up with them?’ Ruvke’ asked
him after the wave of laugher that swept them subsided, Nehama was the only
that didn't laugh and was not impressed at all.
‘No I don’t think so, she must have
simply liked all that bustle around her.’ ‘How do you know, you said you were nine
or ten years old, didn’t you?’ Nehama scolded her husband angrily. ‘That’s what I call a loving man!’ Talma
barged in with feigned enthusiasm, with a quick attempt to restore the pleasant
atmosphere. ‘Would you have jumped for me?’ She asked
Ruvke. ‘Oh come on who jumped off roofs then,
did you ever hear of such a thing?’ He turned to Yoske. ‘Nobody jumped then and nobody jumps
today, it’s just someone who wished to have her, must have been infatuated I
guess.’ ‘That must be it more or less, even if
she would have told him to jump she would have stopped him in the last moment "
although he was just pretending to jump…’ ‘That’s what you all are a bunch of
pretenders!’ Nehama retorted resolutely. ‘Give the car’s keys.’ She added
turning to her husband. ‘What for?’ ‘I want to see something okay!?!’ She answered
angrily raising her voice. The Etsionis’ were dumbfounded. Talma was
about to say a word to Nehama, but changed her mind. The issue was much more serious
than what she and Ruvke’ could have thought of. 'I'm off,' Nehama said and raised to her
feet. 'You may crawl back home for all I care!' © Haim Kadman 2007 " all rights reserved. © 2011 Haim Kadman |
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Added on July 30, 2011 Last Updated on July 30, 2011 AuthorHaim KadmanPetach-Tikva, IsraelAboutProfile: A few words about myself: being a native of a small country whose waist is seventeen kilometers wide in a certain area; and in seven to eight hours drive one can cross its length, I was amaze.. more..Writing
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