Summer Tempest - an excerpt plus synopsisA Story by Haim KadmanThe novel Summer Tempest is my 4th book and my longest literary creation. I’ve writen it during 4 long years from 2003 up to 2007.Smadar Ravnitski ex head waitress mounted the number 31 line bus on her way to her home in Yad Eliahu, an eastern sector of Tel Aviv.About five minutes after seven pm Nehama and Yoske have freed her from her duties. It was of course Nehama who let Smadar leave at about the end of day Yoske just approved his wife's decision and instructions, and kept watching Smadar till she crossed the pastry shop's entrance and vanished among the pedestrians in Alenby Street.It was a day of hard work from seven to seven, twelve hours on her feet; and that's after she stopped to be a head waitress, as the baker and the two additional waitresses were fired. It was not a different day from any other day with its long hours of work, she got used to the long hours, but the tensed atmosphere that started with the announcement of the terror attack at noontime brought her to a state of exhaustion almost.During the afternoon hours at about five pm, when a great number of clients crowded again the hall and the pavement's tables, she did not feel her weariness yet and she worked with passivity and served efficiently the clients, ignoring the whispers, the vulgar compliments and even a hand or two that caressed her behind.If it was a regular day of work, things would not have reached that humiliating state; she thought while she was standing in the bus between the seats close to the rear door, with her back to the door; keeping away from the commuters and male commuters in particular, the feeling of humiliation has not left her yet.Her only consolation was the fact that her salary was not cut down, despite the conditions worsening; for she had to arrange and clean the tables with no one to help her and serve the clients at the same time. The tips the clients left her, after following her with their lusty looks as if they were prowling a prey; undressing her with their eyes full of lust, smiling to her unashamed revealing thoughts of lewdness, which increased the feelings of humiliation that haunted her particularly during the last month.She did not dare to bring up that delicate matter before Nehama; it was pointless; in her current state Nehama may start thinking of replacing her with another another. She did not decide whether she'll resign from her current job or keep on working in spite of her bad feelings, and overcome it and get used to the daily harassing, which accompanies her life each working day during last month.After all many other young women are employed just like her in this kind of work, students and teenagers and they do not have her quite rare conditions of a salary plus tips, while they have to ignore the hands that touch and caress their bodies in expectance for tips, which is the only basic part of their income. But above all, she won't see Yoske anymore if she'll resign.From time to time she peeped through the bus windows on the passing view of the street, afraid she will fail to get off at her bus stop. During the last month she missed her bus stop a couple of times while being buried in her thoughts, and had to walk back with feelings of frustration, and self guilt, on top of her feelings of humiliation.Summer Tempest
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Added on March 27, 2017 Last Updated on April 1, 2017 Tags: Literature, prose, terror, attacks, perseverance, love AuthorHaim KadmanPetach-Tikva, IsraelAboutProfile: A few words about myself: being a native of a small country whose waist is seventeen kilometers wide in a certain area; and in seven to eight hours drive one can cross its length, I was amaze.. more..Writing
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