BrainstormingA Story by Haim KadmanOne more excerpt of my 2oth book, The Thrilling Adventure.Brainstroming The Thrilling Adventure An excerpt As he crossed his secretary desk in the ante room, she brought to
his attention that Yaniv awaits him in his office. The military attaché was not
surprised by the lack of intuition, which his secretary displayed that slight
deficiency of hers was the main reason why he chose her, and not a shrewder
one. Yaniv stood up as Roghel entered his office. While Roghel went over to his comfortable armchair sat down, and
allowed Yaniv to take his seat again, with a slight movement of his right hand.
'Well how were you impressed by the commando training course
opening ceremony in Awash Oren?' Roghel turned to Major Yaniv for the first
ever time in his first name, he had a certain task for his loyal inferior. He
knew how cunning Yaniv is, and how dependant he is on him; and it was high time
to exploit Yaniv for his own ends, and not just to frustrate the delegation's
head. 'It was great simply great sir.' Yaniv answered with a broad smile
all over his beaming face. 'And the swap between your trouble maker and the newcomer came off
quite well.' Roghel remarked with satisfaction, asserting indirectly how wise
was his idea to solve Yaniv's acute problem. 'Yes it came off very well sir, but there's just one small flaw in
it sir, if I may term it as such.' Yaniv ventured to express his
disappointment, despite his efforts to skip any hint of criticism; but seeing
Oron's self-assured and contented face, caused him to disclose the thoughts
that bothered him still. 'Oh really and what's that small flaw in your opinion Oren?' 'Well sir he should've been punished instead of being sent to end
his term in Awash. When you brought up that excellent solution in Josh's
company last week, I was sure that it was an example of how such a problem
should be solved… I was sure that Oron would be swapped with a demolition
officer in some remote team near the Sudanese or Kenyan borders; and thus
instead of being punished he was endowed with an unexpected prize.' 'I do understand your feelings Oren, for if such a case would've
happened back home, the culprit would have been taught a dire lesson. But we
can't afford to resort to strict disciplinary measures here in this country,
and that's just one aspect of the problem; and we can't pull out a demolition
officer in mid course, in some other team. This was the fastest and the most
efficient solution that we'd; and by the way Oron ends up his term in less than
three months, so why not forget the whole thing.' 'Alright sir, I guess I won't see him anymore till he will leave;
and I'm sorry I'd divulged it against my will, but pouring it out makes me feel
better.' 'It's alright Oren; now then I didn't send that newcomer to your
team for nothing, what's his name by the way?' 'Daphnie sir, Elad Daphnie his name.' 'Thank you Oren, I don't know why that red beret was sent to us as
a demolition officer? I don't believe that he's the knowledge with which to
replace an engineering corps officer; but that's just one of our problems named
Daphnie, for he has some close ties with senior Ethiopian officers that visited
our country a few months before he landed here. He's young and inexperienced
and those generals that he met exploited him without his knowledge. The least I
could do was to send him to your team in Jijiga far from his exploiters' reach,
but each holiday he will be in Addis like any other delegation member during
the delegation gatherings. On top of if each time some senior Ethiopian officer
would wish to visit your team, we'll have a problem… So I expect you to see
that this young man will be absorbed with tasks above his head, by letting him
conduct the courses up to the end of first year of service in this country; as
I can't send him back home before the end of the year. 'But why can't you find some excuse to get rid of him right now
sir, before the next commando training course will open up?' Yaniv wondered
surprised, he could not understand why the mighty military attaché can't send
back home the a*****e that refused him an order, and the other one that he dislikes. 'Well he's got quite a backing that young punk, and sending him
back home before the end of his first year of service might cause quite a
mess.' Roghel did not want to admit the real reason behind his hesitations, which
was the fact that Daphnie was an appraised officer with a bright future. 'So try to incite him against me, and at the end of first year I'll
make him pay for it. But do it with much caution of course.' 'Very well sir I'll do it to suit strictly your wishes sir. But I'd
like with your permission to bring one more personal request?' 'Okay Oren shoot it.' 'It's my second year as a team's head, while I'm a veteran and well
experienced officer; I was a company commander, an instructor in company
commanders' course. Thus I believe that I could serve as an instructor at the
command and staff course at the military base in Holeta; for if I'll be
assigned to this job, I'll be able to bring my wife to stay with me again here,
I miss her terribly sir.' 'I'll have to check if it's possible and it will take time Oren,
but let's call it a day and do come tonight to have dinner with me and Bilha.' © Haim Kadman 2016 " all rights reserved. © 2016 Haim Kadman |
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Added on May 1, 2016 Last Updated on May 1, 2016 Tags: Literature, prose, adventure, action romance, love AuthorHaim KadmanPetach-Tikva, IsraelAboutProfile: A few words about myself: being a native of a small country whose waist is seventeen kilometers wide in a certain area; and in seven to eight hours drive one can cross its length, I was amaze.. more..Writing
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