The insultA Story by Haim KadmanAn excerpt of my 18th book, a thriller titled "The Puppet", which will be published very soon.The Puppet The insult An excerpt With nothing much left to do in his empty
office except reading the morning paper, the bored general Hamza opened his
desk's drawer and pulled out Baraka's old mobile. He switched it on and was
very surprised to find a new email from Linah. The moment he started to read it his face
reddened and he got angrier with every additional word that he read in it. He
was ten years older than Baraka, and the message's insinuations referring to
Baraka's sexual potency enraged him with a maddening wave that swept his brain.
He cursed her with loud shouts, which frightened his loyal secretary sitting in
the adjoining ante room. But he did not to knock on his boss door, to ask him
what the matter was. He knew out of experience, that when his boss was under
such fearsome tantrums he had better wait till the end of the storm. It took the general five long minutes to
calm down, and regain his senses. He lighted up a cigar with the hope that it
will help him think of some way to deal with this insulting message, which this
cursed b***h dared to send them. Our last decision in this case was to
stop communicating with her. The general reminded himself while smoking his
cigar, and calming down gradually thanks to the cigar's rich aroma. It took them quite a while to form that
message, to those sophisticated professionals, who're behind her message… But
do they really believe that they'll persuade Dr. Baraka to turn into a double
agent? He could be persuaded very easily in fact, but not when he's kept under
our strict control, and his wife and two daughters are potential hostages.
Would he forsake his wife and his daughters for the sexual favors of this
alluring femme fatale? He might have if he could, but no way! He isn't allowed
to leave Abu Dhabi. So what are they trying to achieve I wonder, could it be
connected indirectly with Dr. Baraka's party members next week's visit…? Yes,
this could be the riddle's unraveling. We'll have to treat every member of Dr.
Baraka's party that will be chosen to visit him, as a suspected agent of the
Zionists intelligence organizations, be it their Mossad or their Shabac. This
issue should be our main discussion aim, in tomorrow's meeting, but I've to
compose a reply to that impudent b***h… I'll compose it and send it at
nightfall, just like all Dr. Baraka's previous messages were sent to her. But
I'll better read again her last message, oh I'd rather not it will enrage me
again. He reminded himself while putting down the burning cigar in the ashtray
with exaggerated force. "Dear Linah you're right I'm very
busy but I've no reason to complain of course. I like your kind gesture it
flatters me, bye till next time." He read it again the message's text,
which he has written on a sheet of paper; and then locked it with Baraka's old
mobile in his desk's drawer. He asked his secretary to report before
him, and ordered him to inform the limo driver to be ready to drive him home.
On his way home he told his driver that he wants to see Dr. Baraka this
afternoon. The general had lunch at home with his
wife, and a pleasant chat with her while eating, in which he listened mostly to
his wife's tales on her budding friendship with Dr. Baraka's wife; what the
latter told her on her husband's career back in the Zionists' state, details
that interested the general in particular of courses. These somewhat details
told from a different aspect broadened the general's knowledge on Dr. Baraka's
character, and on Dr. Baraka's prominent party members just as well. At this
early stage Dr. Baraka's background and previous career, were still quite
important facts, particularly with Dr. Baraka's party members' visit next week.
The general thought while listening attentively to his wife's anecdotes. Thus this pleasant lunch break was longer
than usual, and the general had to spend a shorter time than usual with his
beloved young mistress. When the general entered his office at
five thirty pm, Dr. Baraka was already there waiting for him. 'Sit down please Dr. Baraka,' the general
asked him politely as soon as he sat next to his broad desk. 'Another message arrived from your ex
operator this very morning from somewhere in London, according to my experts'
conclusions. She must be back in Oxford by now to our estimation, well Dr.
Baraka you'd better read it first of all.' The general remarked with a slight
cough, remembering the message insulting content. But he wished to know how it
will influence Dr. Baraka, how the Dr. will react while reading the
insinuations with reference to his manhood. To his surprise Baraka just cleared his
throat once and rather softly, but didn't react as the general was sure he
would. 'Does Your Excellency expect me to reply
to her?' He's still under her spell and refers to
her message as if he accepts her claim without a word or the slightest sign of
outrage, like a beaten dog that squats down silently after being slapped by his
master. 'Yes we'll reply to her,' the general
said while pulling out the sheet of paper with the reply, which he scribbled on
it his desk drawer and handed it to Baraka. © Haim Kadman September 2015 " all rights reserved The 17 thrillers and novels that I've already
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StatsAuthorHaim KadmanPetach-Tikva, IsraelAboutProfile: A few words about myself: being a native of a small country whose waist is seventeen kilometers wide in a certain area; and in seven to eight hours drive one can cross its length, I was amaze.. more..Writing
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