JanineA Story by Haim KadmanAn excerpt of the novel An African sunset. The review at the excerpt's end was written for the thriller The global threat, and as I'm very eager to bring it to your attention, I added it remind you my
Janine An African sunset An excerpt Janine herself opened up the door;
an apron was tied to her narrow waist, and she hastened to let him in, with an
excited and warm smile. Right after she Shut the door after him she rushed to
his arms, clinging to his body and raised her face, offering Shatz her soft
ruby lips. Shatz kissed her with growing fervor clutching her slim body to his
own; and when her breath was almost cut off and she detached her mouth from
his, he watched her lovely face surprised. ‘Where are your father and the
loafer, are we all alone?’ ‘Yes, Papa is in town he took
the loafer with him, he needs him; but they might return any moment now, for
there isn’t much left for him to do there…’ She hastened to add. ‘Please stop
Rubi, we must be careful.’ She warned him detaching herself from Shatz craving
body, against her own will as she removed his hands from her waist. ‘Let’s go in, you’re coming to
the club tonight, aren’t you?’ ‘Oh, I’m supposed to have dinner
at the ambassador’s table, with all our delegation's members…’ ‘Then I wouldn’t see you tonight?’
She asked worried sending her hand to his chin, caressing his face slightly. ‘I’ll come, I must, and I won’t
go to the ambassador’s residence.’ He answered resolutely drawing her to his
body again, covering her face with his kisses. She yielded to him relieved, embracing
him with her white delicate arms; but then she looked up into his eyes with a
sudden start. ‘Come alone at eight when all
the members are already there, and wait for me at our place…’ While all these few words were
said in whispers, as if her father was at the front door, ready to come in, and
still embraced in Shatz’s arms, she led him into the living room. ‘Stay here, I must run to the
kitchen. I’m preparing lunch. I’ve put things in the oven…’ She added laughing
and squeezing out of his arms she ran to the kitchen. Just a few seconds passed and
she was back, smiling happily rushing back to his arms. ‘Papa wanted us to dine at La
Couronne but I objected, I’ve told him that I’ll prepare lunch; you came… I’m
so happy and everything is going so well.’ She laughed delighted. ‘No, not now,
sit down please Rubi…’ She urged Shatz almost pushing him into his chair. ‘We’ll have to behave with much
restraint when Papa will be back.’ She told him with a grave look on her lovely
face. ‘If we’ll be carried off he’ll catch us red handed…’ With these words
said she rushed back to the kitchen. ‘Papa likes you,’ Janine noted
as soon as she returned and sat on Shatz’s knees. ‘But he doesn’t have the
slightest idea, and if I’m wrong…’ She added in a whisper with a sudden fright,
‘he hides his feelings exceptionally well.’ © Haim
Kadman 1989 " all rights reserved. 4.0 out of 5 stars interesting new found author November
3, 2014 Format:Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase I was looking for a thriller
(The global threat) and bought based on that. I found it to be very good and
scary b/c it is very plausible. The book is well written except for what I can
assume to be translation issues, the sentences ran on and punctuation was off,
causing me to double back on a few pages. Don't let that get in your way of a
good story. I will be reading more from this author. © 2015 Haim Kadman |
StatsAuthorHaim KadmanPetach-Tikva, IsraelAboutProfile: A few words about myself: being a native of a small country whose waist is seventeen kilometers wide in a certain area; and in seven to eight hours drive one can cross its length, I was amaze.. more..Writing
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