At the studioA Story by Haim KadmanAn excerpt of my 17th book to be published soon.At the studio Some facts of life An expert But about one month after the closure of his
exhibition, Eti called him again and at that same evening she came to his
studio. It took him some five long minutes to overcome his excitement before he
dared to ask her what is her name, which he suddenly remembered that he does
not know it yet. He showed her around, during the first moments after her
arrival, and managed in that short time to calm down, and was able to conduct a
normal conversation with her without stammering. He showed her his last art
creations, his easel, his brushes and his various additional tools and the
paints, and explained to her what he expects her to do and how it would be done.
The next stage was to make her sit in the right
position opposite his easel, and draw her lovely features with charcoal on
paper. Her beautiful face radiated sadness, which did
increase his inspiration, and after a short while when he realized how well and
accurate he has drawn her features, he dared to ask what was bothering her. 'You were so full of life so sure of yourself Eti, what's
wrong, what troubles you if I may ask?' Eti turned to him haltingly as if she woke up from a
bad dream, and watched his face a few seconds before she answered him. 'Many things have taken place since our last meeting
at your exhibition.' She muttered in a low voice. 'In a rather short period of time I've parted with my
husband formally, it isn't an easy event that one can forget in a couple of
weeks...' 'You mean your brother in law? That's how he introduced
himself to me at the second time you've visited my exhibition.' He explained to
her with a smile, doing his best to revive her spirits. 'My brother in law that's what he told you? He must
have known then already, while I thought that I managed to hide it from him.
What else did he tell you at that encounter?' 'He claimed that the collector that bought my
painting that courts you is a criminal, and he and all your family members are
trying to persuade you to leave him… Is that presumably collector the reason to
your parting with your husband?' Eti nodded her head in approval. 'Not the parting
from my husband saddens me, we'd to part because we couldn't live on together;
but what really hurts me is the treachery behavior of my lover, as long as I
was a married woman that belonged to another he referred to me as to a
challenge, but after my husband divorced me my enthusiastic lover cut his ties
with me and vanished without leaving traces.' Eti added clearing her throat
several times nervously. Yehiel stopped drawing her features and watched her
amazed, and hesitated whether to try on to encourage her to talk, or wait till
she will pour out all her misery on her own. But as she kept her silence and
looked at the direction in which he asked her to look, he dared to ask again
and make her talk, and thus he learned a few more personal details of this beautiful
woman, which was already bewitching him. 'You're still young and pretty,' he added that last
word of compliment stammering, so excited he became. 'Thanks Hilik but I haven't got over it yet, and I've
two small kids to support; I need a job I don't have my ex husband's salary to
sustain me.' She left her seat and approached Yehiel and his easel, to have a
better look at the drawing. 'Well it's lovely Hilik I like it.' Eti declared
smiling, as she saw how well and accurate Yehiel managed to portray her lovely
face features. She sent her hand to his neck, pulled him gently towards
herself, and kissed slightly the astounded Yehiel's cheek. 'I've to go Hilik it was quite a pleasure to model
for you,' © Haim Kadman 2015 "
all rights reserved. To be published soon. #mystery #suspense #espionage #exciting
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