DamascusA Story by Haim KadmanAn excerpt of the thriller ON BOTH SIDES OF THE ABYSS.Damascus On Both Sides of the Abyss An excerpt Nour landed at Damascus international airport at ten
forty five and passed the immigration counters and customs inspectors like any
other passenger, but with ease and without the slightest hitch. A polite
stranger helped with her suitcase up to the exit, where they were accosted by a
cab driver that took her suitcase and the polite stranger left them and
vanished among the coming out crowed. 'Follow me please Ms Ramzi.' The cab driver asked her
and led the way to his parked cab. He drove up to her Christian sector hideout
apartment, and accompanied her carrying her suitcase up to the apartment door.
He unlocked the front door, opened it up, laid her suitcase on the floor,
handed her the keys, and with touching his brow with his right hand, and with
this mute greeting he turned around and left. There was a note on the low coffee table in the living
room: "Welcome, there is enough food in the fridge, and
there is reading material concerning the old city, I'll see you tonight." She just washed her hands and studied with much
interest the reading material, which Abdul Karim left her, and while unloading
her suitcase in the bedroom cupboard she thought things over; and she decided
to visit tomorrow morning first of all the Umayyad Mosque, Damascus greatest
and the third holiest mosque to Muslims. There she would pray for the success
of her dangerous mission in her home town. She was protected by a team of the
internal security service according to Abdul Karim's orders, but she still
feared the vengeance of her own family members and her ex fiancé's family. The Umayyad Mosque is a huge and magnificent mosque
and the most important site in the ancient city, and she knew that she will
need several days to inspect it. She believed that the visit and prayers in
this holy site would ensure the successful start of her inspections of the
ancient city. She had something to eat at lunch time, and resumed
her reading enthusiastically. She was very eager to learn all about the
antiquity importance of her home native town, of which she was very proud of. Abdul Karim arrived at six thirty with a broad smile
spread all his face. He hardly hugged her a few second when they heard a series
of knocks on the front door, and he had to detach himself from Nour's arms with
regret and open the door. It was his driver that brought them their take away
dinner of kebab and French fried plus two bottles of mineral water. 'So what have they asked you to do?' He asked Nour
while having dinner without delay, before the food will cool off. 'They want me to send them Morse messages every night
beside the phone calls to my contact at the UNESCO center.' 'That's simply excellent and it meets our needs, we'll
feed them every night then with disinformation.' He remarked with a chuckle. In her bed after three long hours of bliss that
encouraged her very much, Abdul Karim told her before he left that the cab
driver, which accompanied her from the airport will come to drive her to the ancient
city at nine am. At five minutes to nine am on the next morning after a
quick breakfast, Nour was at the building entrance ready for her first day of inspection;
she did not use any cosmetics but covered her head with the hijab, and waited
in front of her building entrance to the cab driver. She noticed a certain type
leaning with his elbows on the roof of a parked car on the other side of the
road watching her with interest. She was used to men hot looks but it could be
just some one of her protection team. She didn't pay any particular attention
to that type. The cab driver arrived and took her up to the entrance of the
impressive Umayyad Mosque. The immenseness of this magnificent mosque astounded
her she roamed around its huge hall and looked for a secluded corner where she
could pray without kneeling on all her fours, and thus attract unneeded
attention; there were always those fanatics that objected to women presence in
a mosque, and her own father did not let the females of his family to visit
their neighborhood mosque. She believed that Allah would listen to her prayer
and won't demand her to kneel and to touch the carpeted floor with her brow. She was not able to inspect this gigantic and a marvel
of a mosque, so impressed she was. She decided to just roam around in it after
her prayer, and start her inspection at the next day. At one pm she went out to
meet the cab driver that came to pick her up for lunch, and she noticed the
same face on the other side of the road not far off, in the company of another
young male near the same car, on which this type was leaning on the car's roof
when she saw him while she waited for the cab in the morning. The moment her
eyes met with this stranger's eyes, he raised his arm towards the mosque
minaret holding a camera in his hand, and started to take pictures of the
minaret. It did augment her self confidence and she felt thankful to Abdul
Karim for providing her with so much care for her safety. 'Come to pick me up and drive me back to the mosque in
about forty five minutes.' She told the driver and went inside The Old Town
restaurant. She waited two minutes after lunch in front of the
restaurant, when the driver came back and she was driven to the mosque again. She strolled at the chambers and corridors, which she
did not see yet up to five pm, when the cab came to pick her up and drive her
home.
At a quarter to five pm Abdul Karim collected the top
secret documents on his desk and went over to his safe to store them, as he was
crouched before the open safe his office door was opened up suddenly and Rashid
brandishing a Colt forty five in his extended forward hand entered, accompanied
by two young men carrying sub machine guns in their hands. 'You're under arrest Abdul Karim!' He declared to his
astounded boss. Abdul Karim stood up and moved forward with a raised
hand, ready to slap his deputy's face. Rashid pulled the trigger and a forty five bullet
pierced Abdul Karim's heart. He stood like a statue for a short second with an
open mouth, watching his deputy with disbelief and hit the floor with a loud
thump. 'He resisted arrest you witnessed it.' Rashid told the
two young men. 'Search the office and get rid of his body and don't forget to
clean up the mess.' He ordered them and went out. © Haim Kadman 2012 " all rights reserved.
"On both sides of the abyss" Synopsis This espionage thriller relates the
trials of Amina Rifa'ee a young Syrian woman, was born in Damascus Syria;
a beloved daughter of a prominent Ba'ath party member that refused to marry her
father business associate. She was sent to study in London School of
Economics as a compromise while her fiancé' is compensated by her family. Her loneliness drives her to the arms
of Murad the Libyan (an Israeli Mossad member), and during her fourth year
of studies she moves to his apartment and thus cuts off her ties with her
family. As Murad does not succeed to persuade
her to become a secret agent, he introduces her after a relationship of several months to Kenneth
Collins the Beirut American embassy's press attaché But at the very beginning she's
by her fiancé's brother and she is caught by the Syrian internal security service and in her
first interrogation she agrees to become a double agent, to atone for
her treason instead of arrest, torture and death. 62 chapters 148 pages 75,767 words © 2014 Haim Kadman |
StatsAuthorHaim KadmanPetach-Tikva, IsraelAboutProfile: A few words about myself: being a native of a small country whose waist is seventeen kilometers wide in a certain area; and in seven to eight hours drive one can cross its length, I was amaze.. more..Writing
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