And don't forget to call Hillary

And don't forget to call Hillary

A Poem by hjcm

I need eight cups of tea a day 
do let the cat out dear to keep my
nerves in check I must regulate them
to stop feminine hysteria
and make myself agreeable to
him garlic and ginger too chopped up
and oh I must do the dishes now
and start on those cinnamon biscuits
to go with the tea this afternoon

new curtains and I don't see why the 
tablecloth is wonky dear bring the 
shopping in the groceries will spoil 
that crack in the ceiling no I don't 
know when it appeared it might have been 
there all my life when my fourth child was 
born I had the midwife changed because 
and no they just don't listen any 
more price of raspberries in the autumn

© 2012 hjcm


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I love this poem. Its kinda funny how you trail off into a new subject in the middle of a thought. i get it thought. I loved it ! I would love to see another poem written like this !

Posted 12 Years Ago


I read this three times over, and although all I get from this is the image of a naggy wife, I just kept reading it and reading it, because it was just. So. Captivating! The ending got a wee bit jumbled, but it was still very lovely. I don't know why. It must be that each line is a little story within itself, a single little line that paints a tiny picture, and all of these tiny pictures collide into one big...what's the word? Collage! Simply beautiful. 500/100. Into My Favorites it goes!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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hjcm
hjcm

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shower poetry: poetry that comes to you in the shower, or whilst doing something similarly mundane. It is short, mostly unedited, and a little bit shoddy. more..

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